Your Twitter Voice
The Ferris State Torch has started to use Twitter for play-by-play and scoring updates. We’ve also produced a feed on our web site to display the information for non-twitter users.
But we have some issues with voice. Too formal? Too informal?
We’re looking for that Goldilocks Tweet for sports, and tips on how you promote your paper through interaction and tweeting.
Does your paper re-tweet information from other news sources?
What are your Twitter tags?
@FSUTorch



2 Responses
I’m not sold on Twitter as a way for journalists to disseminate information for the long-term. I see it as a way to gather information, get news tips and communicate with one another and readers at times. A fad? I don’t know. A tool, sure.
At Technician, we started tweeting at the beginning of football season and I’ve noticed the same lack of consistency in voice.
I wanted to get beyond play-by-play…
EXAMPLE: Russell Wilson runs the ball in from 5 yards out for a touchdown
…and get to more on-the-fly analysis.
EXAMPLE: That’s Wilson’s 18th career rushing touchdown, making him tied for 7th all-time in quarterback rushing touchdowns.
But after the opener (which I covered and tweeted) other sportswriters I put in charge of tweeting varied a lot in their tweets.
When we defeated a team 65–7, the reporter tweeted “Damn, there goes the shutout” when the other team scored late in the game.
I deleted that tweet, but it made me think about it. Obviously using foul language is out, but how can I instruct others on how to tweet information with analysis in less than 140 characters on a consistent basis?
It brings to light the fact that sports writing isn’t quite objective. In sports, writers often are allowed to connect the stats for the reader…
EXAMPLE: Wilson had a poor showing in the opener, completing just 9 of his 33 pass attempts with one touchdown and three interceptions in the loss.
…whereas in a purely objective story, readers are expected to interpret the raw data.
EXAMPLE: Wilson completed 9 of 33 pass attempts with one touchdown and three interceptions in the loss.
But, as a rule, I would suggest sports tweeters to imagine themselves as television or radio broadcasters. The positions are similar: both tweets and spoken commentary/play-by-play are just words trying to paint a picture or provide background information.
So imagine combining the college basketball play-by-play broadcasting of Brad Nessler with the color commentary of Dick Vitale when something tweet-worthy happens.
What would Nessler say? What would Dickie V say?
Nessler: And J.J. Redick comes off a screen and launches a deep three, and it’s good!
Vitale: Oh my goodness, he’s on fi-yah! The Crazies are rockin’ Cam’ron! Sendek is gonna need a timeout to calm his kids down!
Nessler: And he does take a timeout, so with four minutes remaining in the half, it’s Duke 42, N.C. State 36.
So, maybe in tweetish it would resemble this:
techsports: Another Redick three ignites the sell-out crowd at Cameron, forcing Sendek to take a timeout at the 3:58 mark with the score 42–36 Duke.
It’s important to find a voice between play-by-play and color. We had a lot of followers who follow games while they’re AT the game, and since most are televised, you really have to focus on giving followers something more than they’re already getting.
Follow me and my staff’s tweets @techsports and @ncsutechnician.
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