Your Twitter Voice

The Fer­ris State Torch has started to use Twit­ter for play-by-play and scor­ing updates. We’ve also pro­duced a feed on our web site to dis­play the infor­ma­tion for non-twitter users.

But we have some issues with voice.  Too for­mal?  Too informal?

We’re look­ing for that Goldilocks Tweet for sports, and tips on how you pro­mote your paper through inter­ac­tion and tweeting.

Does your paper re-tweet infor­ma­tion from other news sources?

What are your Twit­ter tags?

@FSUTorch

Ferris State Torch (FSUTORCH) on Twitter

 

About Kelsey Schnell, Creative Developer

Kelsey is the Creative Developer of College Newsroom and former Editor in Chief of the Ferris State Torch at Ferris State University. Currently he works at a marketing and PR firm in metro-Detroit. He is not good at picking up subtle hints or heavy objects. Visit Kelsey's personal site, www.kelseyschnell.com
 
 

2 Responses

  1. fox says:

    I’m not sold on Twit­ter as a way for jour­nal­ists to dis­sem­i­nate infor­ma­tion for the long-term. I see it as a way to gather infor­ma­tion, get news tips and com­mu­ni­cate with one another and read­ers at times. A fad? I don’t know. A tool, sure.

  2. tyjohnson1 says:

    At Tech­ni­cian, we started tweet­ing at the begin­ning of foot­ball sea­son and I’ve noticed the same lack of con­sis­tency in voice.

    I wanted to get beyond play-by-play…
    EXAMPLE: Rus­sell Wil­son runs the ball in from 5 yards out for a touchdown

    …and get to more on-the-fly analy­sis.
    EXAMPLE: That’s Wilson’s 18th career rush­ing touch­down, mak­ing him tied for 7th all-time in quar­ter­back rush­ing touchdowns.

    But after the opener (which I cov­ered and tweeted) other sports­writ­ers I put in charge of tweet­ing var­ied a lot in their tweets.

    When we defeated a team 65–7, the reporter tweeted “Damn, there goes the shutout” when the other team scored late in the game.

    I deleted that tweet, but it made me think about it. Obvi­ously using foul lan­guage is out, but how can I instruct oth­ers on how to tweet infor­ma­tion with analy­sis in less than 140 char­ac­ters on a con­sis­tent basis?

    It brings to light the fact that sports writ­ing isn’t quite objec­tive. In sports, writ­ers often are allowed to con­nect the stats for the reader…

    EXAMPLE: Wil­son had a poor show­ing in the opener, com­plet­ing just 9 of his 33 pass attempts with one touch­down and three inter­cep­tions in the loss.

    …whereas in a purely objec­tive story, read­ers are expected to inter­pret the raw data.

    EXAMPLE: Wil­son com­pleted 9 of 33 pass attempts with one touch­down and three inter­cep­tions in the loss.

    But, as a rule, I would sug­gest sports tweet­ers to imag­ine them­selves as tele­vi­sion or radio broad­cast­ers. The posi­tions are sim­i­lar: both tweets and spo­ken commentary/play-by-play are just words try­ing to paint a pic­ture or pro­vide back­ground information.

    So imag­ine com­bin­ing the col­lege bas­ket­ball play-by-play broad­cast­ing of Brad Nessler with the color com­men­tary of Dick Vitale when some­thing tweet-worthy happens.

    What would Nessler say? What would Dickie V say?

    Nessler: And J.J. Redick comes off a screen and launches a deep three, and it’s good!
    Vitale: Oh my good­ness, he’s on fi-yah! The Cra­zies are rockin’ Cam’ron! Sendek is gonna need a time­out to calm his kids down!
    Nessler: And he does take a time­out, so with four min­utes remain­ing in the half, it’s Duke 42, N.C. State 36.

    So, maybe in tweet­ish it would resem­ble this:

    tech­sports: Another Redick three ignites the sell-out crowd at Cameron, forc­ing Sendek to take a time­out at the 3:58 mark with the score 42–36 Duke.

    It’s impor­tant to find a voice between play-by-play and color. We had a lot of fol­low­ers who fol­low games while they’re AT the game, and since most are tele­vised, you really have to focus on giv­ing fol­low­ers some­thing more than they’re already getting.

    Fol­low me and my staff’s tweets @techsports and @ncsutechnician.

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